So today, Tuesday, my friend Mikaela came over to my house and she got here about 6:15 and she saw my pool and she was like "I didn't know you set up your pool." then I was like ya do you want to swim in it?" then she was like "Ya, lets do it!" So we got on our bathing suits and we went and dived into the freezing cold pool meanwhile the temperature is about 50 degrees outside. Fun fun right?
Tuesday, July 7, 2009
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So let me tell you what I like best about this post: Two things:
1. The title left me expecting you to finish your story by telling how cold the water was. But you didn't, you just ended with, "Fun fun right?" You just left me to imagine how cold the water must have been. Which I didn't expect, but I liked a lot.
2. The voice is super fun. 96% appropriate for the post.
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